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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Do you remember me

    Excellently done. I like how you used the quote in the middle, it made the poem feel more alive. Good job!

    Sep 22, 2008


Don't sit down and write because you're a writer; sit down and write because you have something to say. And if the sea of ideas isn't flowing, well, just tell me about your day.
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